I love Quinn's butterflies, especially how they were stunned to silence lol. I love Quinn kissing Rachel to stop her talking; obviously a very effective method. Don't mind the crying, so long as it's warranted. Personally, I think the girls look very pretty when they cry hehe. I've greatly enjoyed this fic. Looking forward to more from you. :D

P.S. Something bothers me a little while reading your fic. When you're addressing a person or persons, there should be a comma before their name, e.g. "I want to kiss you, Rachel." Hope you don't mind the pointer. Little things like this interrupt the flow when I'm reading.